APUZZO+Antonia

Gina is a U.S Army military dog, who is two years old and __weights__ **weighs** twenty eight kilos, specialized in the __research__ **search** for bombs and explosives. Before going to Iraq, she was a happy and peaceful dog. Nobody could think that Gina would come back from war with a psychological disorder, but after the mission in Iraq **she** was terrorized __from__ **by** everything and everyone. With her tail between __the__ **her** legs, she hid under the furniture. People who had known her before her mission didn’t recognize her as the same dog. She was changed by the six months of war and especially by the bombardment of the convoy where she __travelled__ **was travelling**. Afterwards Gina has started a therapy to treat what the veterinaries call “post traumatic stress disorder”. At the beginning of the therapy her trainer, Melinda Miller, wanted Gina to __make__ **take** long walks together with her and other friendly people. Then they made her jump some obstacles and gave her some tasks, like for example, to find hidden objects. In this therapy, which is still __carrying__ **going** on, they __congratulates to__ **congratulate** her for each success. Above all they encourage her whenever she appears terrified. For some months Gina has been happier and less afraid. She is starting to __recapture__ **recover** __some__ **of** her past skills. However, experts say she couldn’t __come__ **go** back __in__ **to** a warzone. Gina’s __matter__ **situation** raises __an issue on__ **once again the question of** the __ethics__ **morality** of animals used in wars.
 * 27 March 2011. I have made some corrections.-- Molly Rogers**
 * 7. ANIMAL USED IN WARS**

The seat of Toyota in Kentucky __has__ an enormous **tomato and courgette** garden **(oppure: garden of** ** tomatoes and courgettes) **. PepsiCo, the food giant specialized in junk food such as Mountain Dew, Cheetos and Rice-A-Roni established **within its grounds** a corporate garden, strictly __organic__, cultivated by employees. To keep the __employees__ spirits up, American companies, __which__ cannot afford wage rises, invented a new benefit: __the__ corporate garden. No one thought that the repeated requests of the first lady M. Obama to convince the country to eat more wholesome, __organic__ and local food would **have (FUTURE IN THE PAST)** such great results. Till last year, indeed, the garden-mania involved just a selected group of progressive companies such as Google, Yahoo and Sunset Magazine. They were all __from__ Silicon Valley, where knowing how to grow a tomato is __as__ crucial as knowing how to program a computer. F__or__ several months, instead, hundreds of American companies **have been giving** the opportunity to their employees to become part-time farmers during working hours. A person who works in a company with a garden takes home pounds of free vegetables and he can also enjoy the fruits of his labor __in__ cafeterias. Tilling fields also helps the employees to keep **fit.** These are not the only advantages however. Sheila Golden, PepsiCo senior manager and fervent farmer, says, "We want our employees to be free from care, at least for a few hours, from office hierachies. We are all at the same level in the garden".
 * 29 Nov 2010 final correction**
 * Molly Rogers**

The seat of Toyota in Kentucky has got an enormous tomatoes and courgettes garden. PepsiCo, the food giant specialized in junk food such as Mountain Dew, Cheetos and Rice-A-Roni established on his inside a corporate garden, strictly biological, cultivated by employees. To keep the employees spirits up, American companies, who cannot afford wage rises, invented a new benefit: corporate garden. No one thought that the repeated requests of the first lady M. Obama to convince the country to eat more wholesome, biological and local food would have had such great results. Till last year, indeed, the garden-mania involved just a selected group of progressive companies such as Google, Yahoo and Sunset Magazine. They were all of Silicon Valley, where knowing how to grow a tomato is crucial as knowing how to program a computer. Since several months, instead, hundreds of American companies give the opportunity to their employees to become part-time farmers during working hours. A person who works in a company with a garden takes home pounds of free vegetables and he can also enjoy the fruits of his labor at cafeterias. Tilling fields also helps the employees to keep their figure. These are not the only advantages however. Sheila Golden, PepsiCo senior manager and fervent farmer, says, "We want our employees to be free from care, at least for a few hours, from office hierachies. We are all at the same level in the garden".

The seat of Toyota in Kentucky __has got__ an enormous __tomatoes and courgettes__ garden. PepsiCo, the food giant specialized in junk food such as Mountain Dew, Cheetos and Rice-A-Roni established __on his inside__ a corporate garden, strictly __biological__, cultivated by employees. To keep the __employees__ spirits up, American companies, __who__ cannot afford wage rises, invented a new benefit: __missing__ corporate garden. No one thought that the repeated requests of the first lady M. Obama to convince the country to eat more wholesome, __biological__ and local food would have had such great results. Till last year, indeed, the garden-mania involved just a selected group of progressive companies such as Google, Yahoo and Sunset Magazine. They were all __of__ Silicon Valley, where knowing how to grow a tomato is __missing__ crucial as knowing how to program a computer. __Since__ several months, instead, hundreds of American companies __give__ the opportunity to their employees to become part-time farmers during working hours. A person who works in a company with a garden takes home pounds of free vegetables and he can also enjoy the fruits of his labor __at__ cafeterias. Tilling fields also helps the employees to keep their __figure__. These are not the only advantages however. Sheila Golden, PepsiCo senior manager and fervent farmer, says, "We want our employees to be free from care, at least for a few hours, from office hierachies. We are all at the same level in the garden".
 * I have underlined some sections you need to adjust. The annotation "__missing"__ means that something is missing from the text.**
 * --Molly Rogers 18-11-2010**
 * Antonia Apuzzo**

The seat of Toyota in Kentucky __has__ an enormous __tomatoes and courgettes'__ garden. PepsiCo, the food giant specialized in junk food such as Mountain Dew, Cheetos and Rice-A-Roni established __inside__ a corporate garden, strictly __organic__, cultivated by employees. To keep the __employees__ spirits up, American companies, __which__ cannot afford wage rises, invented a new benefit: __the__ corporate garden. No one thought that the repeated requests of the first lady M. Obama to convince the country to eat more wholesome, __organicl__ and local food would have had such great results. Till last year, indeed, the garden-mania involved just a selected group of progressive companies such as Google, Yahoo and Sunset Magazine. They were all __from__ Silicon Valley, where knowing how to grow a tomato is __as__ crucial as knowing how to program a computer. F__or__ several months, instead, hundreds of American companies __let__ the opportunity to their employees to become part-time farmers during working hours. A person who works in a company with a garden takes home pounds of free vegetables and he can also enjoy the fruits of his labor __in__ cafeterias. Tilling fields also helps the employees to keep their __fit__. These are not the only advantages however. Sheila Golden, PepsiCo senior manager and fervent farmer, says, "We want our employees to be free from care, at least for a few hours, from office hierachies. We are all at the same level in the garden".